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Author:	cor
ASL Info:	16/M/NY
Elite Ratio:	2.28 - 28/24/30
Words:	29

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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so much

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This emotion is so strong so powerful its shaken me to the very core.

It's called love

I love this girl more than anything.
I love...

Submitted on 2009-04-13 22:06:22 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Love in itself is such a powerful form of poetry. No wonder it's the basis for so many great works. It's nice to have some one you feel you can really love, and I'm truly happy for you. Love is a wondrous thing. Take care of it. Take care of her. :) I'm sure you will.

Thanks for the write, and for opening your feelings up for others to read.

~Dean of Dream~

<3 Sweets
| Posted on 2009-04-14 00:00:00 | by ESCollege | [ Reply to This ]

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