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    dots Submission Name: Another damn daydots
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    Author: taintedsmiles
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 64/90/75
    Words: 275
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsAnother damn daydots
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    Through to the store,
    and walk through the door.
    I stare at the clock;
    it's a quarter 'til four.

    Fifteen minutes to waste.
    I step 'round to the back,
    and lite me a cigarette,
    load a bowl to relax.

    In an instant it's gone.
    Time to clock in.
    Three more hours 'til break;
    the depths of hell's sucked me in.

    Board says that i'm runner,
    I'll be you I'm not.
    Ask the boss "Can I move?"
    I'm suckered in at a loss.

    Back booth is the job.
    Standing my spot.
    Beeping rings in my head;
    try to convince myself not...

    To yell at the stupid,
    incompetent fools.
    Not like they are starving,
    Or in need of any food.

    Oh god here comes granny;
    slowest bitch on the earth.
    Shaky fingers poke pennies...
    An ugly face; all it's worth.

    Beep, another car.
    The clock says almost five.
    Hurry to the call,
    As she flying through in drive.

    Looking up and at the screen;
    one last car 'til i sweep.
    A man:
    Who yells at me.

    His oder is wrong;
    so he says for refund.
    I tell him to come,
    but his food is all gone.

    There's nothing to do.
    Even though he can't prove,
    What he said,
    As the truth.

    But still anyways,
    We give money back.
    A whole $2.13.
    He's still pissed?
    What an ass!

    He's all taken care of,
    The clock's just flown by.
    I break, clock back in,
    and plaster a smile.

    Gotta get this shit gone.
    My times must be fast!
    "Welcome to McDonalds,
    can i wipe your ass?"




    Submitted on 2009-04-14 12:01:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    Oh god here comes granny;
    slowest [censored] on the earth.
    Shaky fingers poke pennies...
    An ugly face; all it's worth.


    But still anyways,
    We give money back.
    A whole $2.13.
    He's still pissed?
    What an ass!

    Gotta get this [censored] gone.
    My times must be fast!
    "Welcome to McDonalds,
    can i wipe your ass?"

    there's much to hold the reader all the way to the end but also much that is confusing and discourages this outcome.

    and you freaks always leave [censored] off the order, where's the goddamn burger, the two apple pies you convinced me to buy even if I was annoyed at you for asking if there was anything else,

    freak, if i wanted something else wouldn't i have ordered it, but i forked over the 2 bucks and anticipated the apple pies you then never put in the bag, along with the straw

    but hey you remembered the one breath of honey mustard to go along with the crispy chicken burgers and nuggets i got for the kids, mother [censored]er they aren't here either!!!
    | Posted on 2009-04-14 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]


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