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    dots Submission Name: Mine Angeldots

    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       for my girlfriend who was diagnosed with thyroid cancer. they performed surgury March 18. she is doing well.

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    dotsMine Angeldots

    Oh ye angel,
    mine beloved,
    how beautiful
    thou art now
    as fear and pain
    do call your name
    you waver not,
    nay falter,
    but deal love
    greater still.
    In these dark times
    my mind abides
    in corners darker yet,
    but from thine heart
    doth Love's light shine
    and becon strong
    this heart of mine
    into thine warm,
    encompasing arms.
    ye hold me now
    in thine arms tight
    and sanguine thoughts
    of that dark night
    beneath his austere gaze
    thine peaceful words
    of salvation do now quell.

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