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Submission Name: Stir Me Alive dots

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Author:	Voodoo_Lounge
ASL Info:	21/F/OH
Elite Ratio:	2.29 - 408/588/171
Words:	76

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	563
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	425

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Stir Me Alive dots

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Please rouse me from
This slumber, stir me alive.
Take me to a scenic cliff
So i can imagine the dive.
Do these viens
Beneath my wrists
Even function,
Much less exist?
Does the flesh that
Occupies this space
Even come with
A real face?
I hate tonight
That i am real
And even more
That i can feel.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.