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    dots Submission Name: River of the Minddots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    dotsRiver of the Minddots
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    Calm and peaceful, inner-flowing;
    wide and deep without mar.
    Sudden siphon, forced-narrow;
    rolling rapids beneath the sky.
    Violent falls of raging noise,
    bubbling pools of boiling springs.
    Stemming out in narrow rivulets,
    calm and serene, peace again.




    Submitted on 2009-04-14 13:05:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this. your words show the minds way beautiful as it is really.
    | Posted on 2009-05-24 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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