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    dots Submission Name: The Beast Withindots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsThe Beast Withindots
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    It rises, collides, fights,
    wins, and takes control.
    It draws me near,
    forces me to watch.

    Consciousness failing,
    but I can't pass out,
    I can only watch as
    the beast within plays.

    She screams as it draws near,
    runs away and falls.
    The pain is sharp as fangs
    I don't have grow long.

    He is upon her in one fell swoop,
    drawing near her neck;
    inhaling the sweet scent
    of her pure blood.

    It's so intoxicating,
    irresistible to me.
    I can't hold back,
    only bite down hard.

    Eyes rolling back,
    ecstasy fills me
    as the first squirt
    hits the back of my throat.

    Fighting with all my might,
    I pull back from him
    and watch his act...
    yet I still enjoy the taste.




    Submitted on 2009-04-14 13:07:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i dig the view you wrote this from the beast and you but it is you. its way neat.

    | Posted on 2009-04-15 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      excellent job. i just loved the way you made it sound that you and the beast within are diffferent persons, but still related. 'fangs i dont have grow long'....'yet i still enjoy the taste'..
    awesome.. you have impressed me a lot.
    and do check out my poems..
    | Posted on 2009-04-15 00:00:00 | by rsujith | [ Reply to This ]


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