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    dots Submission Name: Here in the darknessdots
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    Author: freeangel
    ASL Info:    22/female/bournemouth
    Elite Ratio:    3.59 - 87/117/110
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsHere in the darknessdots
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    Here in the darkness

    Do you ever want a reason
    To scream, shout and-
    What?
    The desert sands
    Never settle the same way
    After the storm.

    It is endless.
    What felt good
    Now feels torturous.
    Slow. Not how
    It was imagined
    To
    Be.
    Stars creep into the darkness
    Their sharp edges searing the velvet,
    Lighting my way.
    Impossible to consume
    Due to the manner of their gain.

    Fuck this,
    They
    Say.

    Your saviour is come!
    The darkness is over,
    The monster is vanquished.

    Your will done.

    Does it not feel wonderful
    Here in the darkness?




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