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Emotions In A Bottle

Author: Midorininja
ASL Info:    16/secret/Michigan
Elite Ratio:    2.03 - 6 /9 /11
Words: 54
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
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Emotions In A Bottle

Darkness falls over the light,
Cold over comes warmth.
Headaches from frustration.
Piled up stress.
Bottled up emotions.
No where to hide,
The world becomes silent.
Everything pitch black,
Bleeding on the inside
For any sounds.
No feeling left in the body.
Cold to the touch.
Never doubt darkness,
The devil itself.

Submitted on 2009-04-14 15:42:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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