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Bit by Bit

Author: Voodoo_Lounge
ASL Info:    21/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408 /588 /171
Words: 45
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Bit by Bit

Synthetic, fake
Only of plastic
twisted and bent
But i am not elastic.
Things are starting
To get drastic
And how much longer,
Can I mask it?
Plastic, synthetic
Only fake
But how much can
A mannequin take?
Bit by bit
About to break.

Submitted on 2009-04-15 13:37:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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