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A dramtic Comedy Play that I made!
(Two teenage girls sitting on lounge chairs sipping something to drink.)
Elina: OMG girl do you see that hot guy over there he is like so cute. I think Iím going to like ya know talk to him.
Lora: whatever he is so last year. Look at him he looks like my old boyfriendsÖ wait that is my boyfriend. Ugh so EW.
Elina: oh youíre right and I was totally hitting on him. Gross. Kinda.
Elina: What your butt donít what me. God!
Lora: What ever. Youíre so immature!
Elina: OMG you are so not talking to me. Thatís why your eyeliner doesnít go with your base color.
Lora: OMG OMG no youíre not talking to me.
Elina: No of course notÖ Duh Iím talking to you. Thatís why I said you.
Lora: Youíre confusing yourself.
Elina: What!! OK SO WHAT!
Lora: Immature! Get a life!
(She stands to leave. But bumps into a Goth girl)
Lora: Ewww gross you need a totally need a makeup check.
Goth girl: You need a brain transplant.
Elina: Girl I know she wasnít talking to you.
Lora: Its not my fault your eyeliner looks like a monkey did it. Your lips match Barneyís skin.
Goth girl: Itís not my fault your brain is an equivalent to a monkey.
Lora: We come from monkeys!!! So that means Iím very smart you donít know what youíre talking about!
(Goth boy enters)
Goth Boy: What's up ex girl!
Goth girl: This girl is confused:
Elina and Lora: SO IMMATURE!
Goth Girl: Isnít this girl youíre ex girlfriend.
Goth Boy: Yeah. Too bad there brain isnít as stable as their bodies.
Elina and Lora: OMG I know he wasnít talking about me!
Goth Girl: OMG thereís a huge panda bear!
(Elina and Lora scream and Exit)
Goth girl: You need to date better people. Donít they know that Panda bear live only in China?
Goth Boy: Um maybe I need dating advice
(Elina and Lora enter the look around cautiously and the run to Goth boy)
Elina: Your Hot date me!
(Lora slaps her. And they begin to fight.)
Lora: Heís my boyfriend.
Goth boy: No Iím not.
Lora: you are now.
Goth Boy: Why I didnít ask to date you.
Lora: Youíre going to date me because Iím hot.
Goth Boy: SoÖ I am too.
Goth girl: Youíre so self-centered. Plus Iím hotter, and I donít need help like the rest of ya'll.
Silence as everyone stares at her.
Goth Girl: What? Thatís why thereís a wolf spider crawling. On the floor.
Lora screams and exit.
Goth girl: Why didnít you run?
Elina: I like spiders and plus they donít live in Pennsylvania.
Goth Boy: wanna go out with me.
Elina: Duh. Thatís like asking me what 10+10 itís obviously 17.
Goth Boy: Youíre hot and youíre smart.
Goth girl: Why am I friends with you?
Goth Boy: Cause....
Lora: OMG I saw this really cute guy. Heís my Boyfriend now.
Boyfriend: I'm hot.
Lora: Yes you are.
Goth girl: What is he you little Chihuahua?
Lora: Awwww thatís a cute nickname.
Boyfriend: Wanna see my awesome abs.
Goth girl: At least they have the same IQ. You guys make me not want to date anyone of the opposite sex.
Boyfriend: Iím too sexy for my shirt too sexy for my shirt too sexyÖ.
(Tomboy girl comes in)
Stephanie: Am I the only sane person here!!!
Goth girl: No Iím sane.
(Everyone except Stephanie and Goth Girl leave)
Goth Girl: What's wrong with our world?
Goth Girl: What?
Stephanie: I donít know just trying to see if youíre still sane. Iím Stephanie.
Goth Girl: Iím Lisa. Our world is full of bubble heads.
Stephanie: Lets shake this from out of memory.
(Hip-hop music turns on and Goth girl and Stephanie begin to dance widely and exit)
Submitted on 2009-04-15 14:15:11
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Wow. lol funny play. When do i get introduced. Just kidding. I like it. It's funny but then it turns kind of serious.
| Posted on 2009-09-02 00:00:00 | by
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Strange, but a lot like my "Birds That Soar" but I use fewer words. Read if you get a chance and post a critique.
| Posted on 2009-04-15 00:00:00 | by
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