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    dots Submission Name: Twiddle dee Twiddle Dumdots
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    Author: wolfgurl830
    ASL Info:    18/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 42/38/34
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 664
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 496



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    dotsTwiddle dee Twiddle Dumdots
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    Twiddle dee Twiddle dum
    I like to suck my thumb
    Wiggle me toes and shake my feet
    And dance hop and leap
    My addiction
    Is the sugary sweets
    You donít get nor do i
    I hate mornings love nights
    Hate chocolate
    Sometimes I act like ive lost it
    And donít like being a girl
    Pink makes me want to hurl
    I like dogs and everyone knows
    Ok this is it
    Time to close
    Twiddle dee Twiddle Dum




    Submitted on 2009-04-15 14:26:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Okay I just looked up nsc (below), he or it calls themself John Doe, that means a dead guy with no identity. Fair enough.
    | Posted on 2009-09-17 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      No it doesn't sux. Who was that nsc guy???
    | Posted on 2009-09-17 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      Sucks. But keep trying. Better than most of the stuff on this site. At least your not trying to shock anyone.
    | Posted on 2009-04-15 00:00:00 | by nsc | [ Reply to This ]
      a nursey theme , nice flow, showing your likes and dislikes on assorted stuff, great poem , keeing it real ,
    | Posted on 2009-04-15 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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