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Andrias Japonicus

Author: Midorininja
ASL Info:    16/secret/Michigan
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Words: 98
Class/Type: Poetry /Nature
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This is for mai Zoology project in school. It's about the Japanese Giant Salamander. It is almost extinct. Please read for a better understanding.

Andrias Japonicus

Fire in the colour,
And large in size.
A tasty treat,
For the Japanese eye.
Their species is fading,
Soon all will die.
The Japanese lick their lips
As they say good bye.

This is the last of their species.
People are willing to save
All that is left.
Pulling them farther from their grave.
In captivity
They shall stay.
They will be released
Once upon a day.

The population will grow,
And continue,
Hopefully, to do so.
But for now,
They shall lay low.
They are amazing creatures,
Thought you’d like to know.

Submitted on 2009-04-15 15:23:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I know. It killed me to right this. I am more into writing about emotion rather than things...
| Posted on 2009-04-19 00:00:00 | by Midorininja | [ Reply to This ]
  Give Me A Break. I love poetry, but it hurts to read crap like this.
| Posted on 2009-04-15 00:00:00 | by nsc | [ Reply to This ]

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