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    dots Submission Name: Tragedydots
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    Author: Morsketch
    ASL Info:    21/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 28/26/26
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Misc/Death
    Total Views: 553
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsTragedydots
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    And I will sleep through these long days
    For forever never ends

    With all these differences nothing changes
    No one changes

    All is lived and nothingís learned
    We all run in circles

    Chasing dreams that fly by night
    Digging ourselves in deeper

    Love is gained and love is lost
    By the flip of the same e(x)ternal coin
    That determines hurricanes
    And other murderous disasters

    But should I wake, may it be with you
    Perfect in itís imagining
    Some may tire of such a world
    But I canít sleep off this tragedy




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