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    dots Submission Name: Miss You,dots
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    Author: dismal_s child
    ASL Info:    18/F/On A Carousel
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 440/401/163
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 87
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 422



    Description:
        He's working night shift, and I was bored so I thought I'd put my feelings into words.


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    dotsMiss You,dots
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    I've heard it a million times,
    And I can't wait to hear it a million more.
    Waiting for you to come home.
    Laying on the bed, listening for the front door
    I'll wait.
    For the time you come in,
    Scoop me up,
    Skin on skin,
    as the sunrise will crawl,
    Crawl lazily in.
    So I will lay here, in wait.
    Wait for you and the coming day.




    Submitted on 2009-04-16 01:23:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      my Precious little hibernating cub!

    what a writer you are!

    eat well, take your vitamins, get a little exercise later on (maybe go for a walk around the block with him?).

    i love you!
    | Posted on 2009-04-18 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]


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