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    dots Submission Name: Yuri And Flames Adventure: Welcome To Runescapedots
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    Author: Vossler
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 1/1/8
    Words: 426
    Class/Type: Story/Legend
    Total Views: 157
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1255



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       It seems like Yuri and Flames world went upside down when he appeared and now they are in another world called Runescape....


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    dotsYuri And Flames Adventure: Welcome To Runescapedots
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    The saradomin mages made it to Runescape. One of the saradomin mages said "These two boys are the key to mankind" "I know" The other saradomin mage said. They arrive at the Lumbridge castle The Duke comes in and greets them "Are these the boys? The Duke said happy "Yes they are the boys" a sardomin mage said. "Very well i shall let them sleep" The Duke said. Its been a few hours since the conversation. Yuri and Flame woke up "I smell something good" Flame said "Lets go see what it is" Yuri said They ran down the stairs and saw a fiest going on. "Whats this?" Flame asked. A chef was cooking stuff for the Dukes birthday "Its nothing yet because i cant make the cake without the ingredients!" The chef said sad "We can help you" Yuri said "Oh you will? thank you so much! ill need one egg, flour and milk" The chef said excited. "Maybe the two legends are right for this world"




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