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    dots Submission Name: ITS ONLY EVERYTHINGdots
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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.14 - 262/243/141
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsITS ONLY EVERYTHINGdots
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    WHERE ARE YOU TONIGHT
    WHERE AM I
    I HAVE NOT BEEN SO AFARID IN A LONG TIME
    WHERE IS MY SHELTER NOW
    IF I MOVE MY HEAD TO FAST EVERYTHING BLURS
    EVERYTHING TASTES FUNNY
    SOUNDS FUNNY
    FEELS FUNNY
    I WANT THINGS TOO
    WHY AM I INVISABLE
    I MATTERED ONCE
    I AM SO LONELY
    NONE NEEDS ME ANYMORE
    I WANT TO BE IMPORTANT
    BUT I AM SO SMALL




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