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    dots Submission Name: THINGS I REMEMBER AND THINGS I KNOW dots
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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    25/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 246/236/131
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
    Total Views: 66
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 996



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       PLEASE READ WITH AN OPEN MIND dont mistake morbid apperation for reality i am inspired by teh world around me and soemtimes that world is ugly


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    THINGS I REMEMBER AND THINGS I KNOW
    Metal looks fluid when its hot enough
    There is a silence a gunshot leaves
    So many things I know that I shouldn’t
    I have memorized the colors in a bruise while it heals
    And I know some never do
    alcohol makes a flame blue
    Like my eyes he said
    And how does one reply angel
    And I said yes sir
    Shhhhhh
    that’s my good girl
    You are a good girl
    And heather is bad
    So so bad isn’t she ?
    Yes sir
    You love me don’t you ?
    Want to make me happy don’t you?
    And it makes me happy to hurt you doesn’t it
    You understand don’t you
    That I love you and want to make you right
    You want to be right don’t you ?
    I want to make you beautiful
    Mark you so that you are mine
    don’t sleep not yet
    Let the pills take you gently
    I will rock you awe. See
    Shhhhh that’s my good girl




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