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    dots Submission Name: An Ode To Things Yet Founddots
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    Author: SonOfDamascus
    ASL Info:    18/m/Maine
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 27/35/37
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 462
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1165



    Description:
       It's Kind Of Self Explanatory.
    And Some Of The Repetition Is Purposeful.
    The Rhyming Scheme Is Off, On Purpose As Well.
    Mostly Because Love, Is Off.
    And So, Am I.


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    dotsAn Ode To Things Yet Founddots
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    Further Down The River.
    Ill See You.
    Let It Be Known,
    Let It Be Shown In Everything I do.
    Well Steal Away.
    Leave It All Behind.
    Set It Aside For Another Day.
    The Clock Ticks Louder,
    When Time Is Running Out.
    Ill See You Eventually.
    We Can Show Them Just Exactly.
    What We Are Meant To Be.
    Weve Yet To Get Our Chance.
    Or Even That First Or Last Dance.
    Let It Be Flown,
    From The Highest Peak.
    A Message For The Future,
    Speaking Of Things To Come.
    A Passion Unlike Never Before.
    Overflowing On Every Shore.
    Stealing Time Away.
    Losing Seconds In Our Own Way.
    Create Another Thing.
    Out Of Past Loves Destruction,
    Fulfill This Prophecy.
    Of You And Me.
    The Only Problem Is.
    Youre A World Off.
    So Ill Run These Peaks.
    And Climb These Valleys.
    Stave Off The Tweaks.
    And Survive The Volleys.
    Ill Find My Way To You.
    So I Can Follow Through.
    With My Message.

    Im Coming Soon.
    To Love You Too.





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    ||| Comments |||
      The ending was shaky.
    although the entire thing pulled it together. I liked the beginning this time. it was more in depth. I like your style.
    -Rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-12-14 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]
      i love it.
    | Posted on 2009-05-20 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this piece. Your style of writing reminds me of some of my own. I wish you the best.

    Love and Peace,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2009-04-17 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this piece. Your style of writing reminds me of some of my own. I wish you the best.

    Love and Peace,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2009-04-17 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]


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