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    dots Submission Name: Listening with all my heartdots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 681
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    Description:
       soul journey expression


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    dotsListening with all my heartdots
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    Surpassing Death in realisation,
    die I shall but not be dead
    Death nods his hood in recognition
    I nod back my lifted head.
    Success it seems
    is in still standing
    After the fire
    Completes it's branding.
    Here I stand with a full deck
    of shuffled cards, of values met.
    I lay await the call and beck
    of the universe's soft requests
    Gently alert and eyes wide open.
    Awareness in the breath just taken
    that gives a pause to choose the action
    aligned most with your highest good.

    Come to me, come to me, come to me.
    I'm listening with all my heart.




    Submitted on 2009-04-17 01:49:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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