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    dots Submission Name: Foedadeadots
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    Author: Shadowstar13
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 191/191/129
    Words: 479
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
    Total Views: 579
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    Description:
       I was given this name (Fodadea) and its meaning (the ugly goddess) by a friend, and this song just leapt into my brain.

    I won't give too much away, but here's something to get you started.

    Narrated by some person (male, female, guess) who has made Fodadea's life miserable, only to discover that she hold immense power.
    What sort of power?
    Well, that's for you to decide.


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    dotsFoedadeadots
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    Her face unwashed, her hair unbrushed
    The clothes she wears all torn
    Herself, unloved; herself, untouched
    Life is her eternal thorn

    [Chorus:]

    The power that she holds in her head
    Could it send us to the grave?
    Conversing with voices and loves long dead?
    Her soul's too late to save!
    The amaranth manifest, the darkness loves her mind
    Power more than skin-deep, what's there if you can find-?

    She's scared of what lies deep inside
    Thinks about it every day
    In veils of vapidity she'll hide
    Till the sun's hate turns to gray

    Her twisted teeth, her skin pulled tight
    Over her skeleton-frame
    Tortured eyes, battles inside
    But she, not us, is to blame!

    [Chorus:]

    The power she holds in her head
    Can it send us to the grave?
    Conversing with voices and loves long dead?
    Her soul's too late to save!
    The amaranth manifest, the darkness loves her mind
    Power more than skin-deep, beauty's not there if you can find

    Torn angel in a modern Fall, she cannot close her eyes
    Until she sees the sun setting, she'll hear blood coated cries

    Whole worlds spin in her core, within
    She is a goddess throned
    Radiation of inner inflamation: sin
    Is in her very bones

    From the pits of hell to the northern skies
    She can make all spirits bow
    Even soulless throats give her their cries
    Power is divinity now


    [Chorus:]

    'Cause the power she holds in her head
    Could send us to the grave
    Conversing with voices and loves long dead
    Fodadea's too late to save:
    The amaranth manifest, the darkness loves her mind
    Power more than skin-deep, oh, it's there if you can find

    But she'll never use it on her own
    The demon's breaking free
    Feral acts she can't disown
    Force her dying scream
    Oh God, tell me we've not brought on
    Her great awakening

    [Chorus:]

    The power that she holds in her head
    Could send us to the grave
    Conversing with voices and loves long dead
    Her soul's too late to save:
    The amaranth manifest, the darkness loves her mind
    Power more than skin-deep, beauty's there if you can find

    Scarred by life and just by Fate
    The ugly one's chaos's key
    But any love has come too late
    Her power's won... you'll see...
    The power she holds in her head
    May send us to the grave....
    Any hope for us is long dead....
    We are too late to save.


    [Chorus:]

    But the power she holds in her head
    Could send us to the grave
    Conversing with voices and loves long dead
    Her soul's too late to save:
    The amaranth manifest, the darkness loves her mind
    Power more than skin-deep, beauty's there if you can find

    The amaranth manifest:
    The darkness....
    Is her mind....




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    ||| Comments |||
      specially good! The repeated refrain simply makes it.
    | Posted on 2009-12-06 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      Damn! That's bad ass!! I'm gonna fave this one too!! ;D

    ~Jaymee
    | Posted on 2009-04-19 00:00:00 | by PhantomRose | [ Reply to This ]


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