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    dots Submission Name: Luxury dots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    18/M/Ohio State
    Elite Ratio:    6.06 - 174/189/127
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 58
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1273



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    dotsLuxury dots
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    im knee deep in the ashes of angels
    the petals of roses
    the pages of romances
    the promises of leopards
    bold spots and feline features
    the hunt in me, is reawakened
    by her tight gown and perverse persuasion
    she curls up on the fur print
    curved and elegant in tease
    the sky falls down with the tapestry
    and velvet shrouds flap like hummingbirds
    to the notion that her skin and my emotion
    mask my predatory motions
    within grinding harmony of composition
    matching tempo to the lively triple meter
    Chopin's Mazurkas in full blast
    echo soft off the stone floors
    and twist the dancing fire
    the atmosphere is old
    the staircase builds
    the excasty builds
    she rises, ascending and clutching
    silk sheets and lions mane
    while gasping, and sinking
    into the richness of the sunrise
    and all its brilliant hues
    painting her nude body amber
    warming her blood
    warming me
    keys crash together
    complimenting chaos
    raging and storming
    while I hold her in climax
    and the maelstrom of our ballroom dance
    falls back between the pages of history




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