Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: forever for so onedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: sickly
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 545/537/203
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
    Total Views: 679
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 836



    Description:
       this is a new old one also submitted to Lulu.POETRY for more exposure if that is at all possible.i realize i get some views but no comments, but that is alright as we're all involved in a fine kettle of fish as they say, but who is they?something smells fishy in denmark.how up the rungs, high as it crowed?


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsforever for so onedots
    -------------------------------------------


    you are free through dark nights
    satan not close, neo era eon one
    blitz blood, james blonde, our man
    show me what you're like inside
    read the letters of my body enough
    the business of my profession is it
    organized purpose, and power of now
    prove all things as all is proven
    a doctor on applied healings taught
    old era now new, come kingdom dawn
    civil state is kaput, crush, failed
    he's der herr, mainjammed in frame
    idiots of late not to be inviolate
    sowed as seed of revenge war
    it's my time of incident instance
    momentous april 10, 2007, heavened
    lethal force attempt by killer cops
    caught by the crotch of no evidence
    england and englander is all over
    french führerist fascist futurist




    Submitted on 2009-04-18 14:45:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    173434

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry