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    dots Submission Name: Someone with youdots
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    Author: wizardmaster
    ASL Info:    2314/girl/China
    Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 7/7/21
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsSomeone with youdots
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    If you tell me I must be an apprentice, I will.
    If you tell me I must be a shoe maker, I will.
    I will be anything you tell me,
    As long as you do the same.

    If you follow me,
    I'll follow you.
    If you fly,
    I will fly.

    You will always have
    Someone to be with you;
    through the hard,
    and bad times.
    Through the easy
    and good times,
    I will be there
    by your side.

    You'll have a shoulder to cry on,
    A person to comfort you,
    A person that will
    help you no matter what the problem is.
    A person to cuddle, and adore you,
    Where ever you are.

    I will be with you
    'till the end,
    no matter what.




    Submitted on 2009-04-18 15:01:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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