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    dots Submission Name: Kids Stuffdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 319
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
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    Kids Stuff

    Children will believe anything

    In talking animals
    And moons made of cheese
    Fairy castles
    With shinning knights
    And magic doors
    Secret gardens
    Dwarves and Trolls
    Evil kings and Evil Queens
    Snow White dreams
    Arabian Princesses
    Warlocks and Witches

    Yes children will believe in anything

    Mermaids and cities beneath the sea
    Great monsters
    Unicorns and Dragons
    Kids are so easily lied to
    And led astray
    The advertising of the latest craze
    The fried slop burger meal
    That taste so great
    The necessity of cardboard box crunchy
    Mass produced
    Plastic child
    Of Pokermon desirability

    Yup kids will believe in anything

    The mulching gargling abuse of an industry
    Little consumer-ites
    Hooked on the sweet and salty
    The cartoon world
    Of their resale-ability
    Video games of make up
    Fashion they need to be
    In the general acceptance
    Of peer pressure conformity

    Children will believe anything

    In plastic knives
    And rubber weapons
    In invincible soldiers
    And righteous wars
    The marketable idioms
    Sell them violence
    Convince them they have already grown
    Play their games
    On the fad gadget mobile phone

    Little innocent targets
    To blackmail parents with
    Into parting with their hard earned cash
    Give in
    Stop the tantrums and the tears
    Happy little children
    See how we feed them
    See what we teach them
    About adults

    Yup! Kids will believe anything

    In star reaching swings
    And daisy chains

    In the realistic rattle of toy machine guns

    In the great and grand promise of heaven

    In a designer label

    In the miniature worlds of Lilliputians

    In what ever is fed to their imagination

    With the chocolate goo flavored ketchup sauce

    Of this crude ever pleasing entertain me culture

    Yup! Children will believe anything

    Amazing

    What we teach them about adults














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