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    dots Submission Name: The End of Timedots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 276
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe End of Timedots

    The End of Time

    The passing time in a stillness of passage
    Blown soft with wanting
    Furlongs in the corridors of sighs

    Are dreams of mine
    Left unsleeping
    Repeating the hail of trumpeted cries

    Another time
    Touched by the paraded flowers
    Of promises
    To pick the blooms
    My hands seem destined
    And tender the bouquet of my wishes
    For my lover
    To choose

    My life in time
    Was sure to reach this conclusion
    Its stark years
    To roll out searching
    The rhetoric of my defences
    Breeched in my heart
    So easily

    Once unknown
    This naked
    Gathers me full
    To the orchestral passions
    Of its thumping timpani
    Flaunted in my ears
    With violin string dexterity

    Brings forth a timely tempo 1812th crescendo all its own
    Crashing, spraying, spume
    Of literary hurricanes
    Practiced demonstratively
    With unspoken lips
    And un-tasted words
    Lay floundering in the assemblages

    Drip unexpressed
    On pitiful poetry

    These Bedouins in my soul
    Left me to map a desert
    Beyond describing

    This time I could have
    Imagined more
    But the traces of ancient floods
    Flashed rumble in their predicted courses
    And overcame my statutory right
    To resist
    Battered at me with Peony lids
    And sort finally to leave me here
    Feathered drifting
    In a smile

    The last time this is
    And occasion risen fated
    Has me trapped
    That fortunes bubble wrapped
    Would dare to pry from me
    The ultimatum of hope

    And if I myself, should dare to believe
    In the end of the time
    Without love

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