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    dots Submission Name: The Tiny Seed Openeddots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsThe Tiny Seed Openeddots
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    The Tiny Seed Opened


    Deep the ponderous silent beginning
    Rumbled its struggle to
    And break open once upon its lilting

    And thought
    It lifted high some resounding
    Gathered itself by pulse climactic
    Loosening
    The swollen burst of its making

    And deeper driven the slow light emancipating
    Rising glory
    The exulted splendour
    Forth rushing spreads encompassing
    In the eternal reaches
    The heart beats deliverance
    Sings joyous cries

    With life eyes

    I am here !
    I have arrived !

    The impassioned apex of praise
    Fortissimo to the pinnacle creation
    The tiny seed
    Opened



    Inspired by

    Also Sprach Zarathustra, Op. 30

    ( Eng Thus Spake Zarathustra) is a tone poem by, Richard Strauss composed in 1896 and inspired by Friedrich Nietzsche philosophical treatise of the same name.

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