Fold of Skin -------------------------------------------
She holds my wallet
whats left of me
folded leather
plastic pictures
used up cocaine baggies
and expired condoms.
Fortune cookie advice
and cash that's been melting like ice.
She holds my secrets,
I blush even in death
Wow 12 views WTF, this is why i read poetry, so many people here write so good.
i felt your sighs of "thats all me" and perhaps your embarassment as she sifted thoughtfully through your wallet. i suggest re-posting this it is very good.
Interesting view. I think you could omit "of me" and kinda just list the contents and then the last three lines. (just a thought) Anyhow, I like the cash melting like ice line. Oh! and fold of skin- because leather is cow hide- clever!
Submission Name: Fold of Skin
