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    dots Submission Name: Can you hear me?dots
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    Author: Spin
    Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 72/101/84
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsCan you hear me?dots
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    FATHER LOOK AT ME
    for I am ready for your face
    so long my gaze strayed
    played away from your swollen existence
    Pennies heads up create luck
    when plucked from faith
    LOOK IN MY EYES
    have the tables turned
    as your skin grows old... dim and dull
    Mine glows a fire existence
    Phoenix from the flames
    ELAIN
    I need to know
    built from your blood
    floor up
    you drained me dry like summer skies
    streaked jet cloud cover
    sister.....brother....Mother
    difference of black sheep peaked by sweet abandon
    MAN TO MAN
    I stand before you
    naked to the truth
    raped by hate
    soul bleeding on the floor like a first time whore
    CAN YOU SEE ME?
    Your skin burns in my light
    eyes blind to my rebirth
    Bow down to me
    I AM YOUR GOD
    ONLY I CAN FORGIVE YOU





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    ||| Comments |||
      Interesting. You have some unique turn of phrases. What is “E LAIN” suppose to say? The speaker’s energy- anger builds with each line towards a definite conclusion. It is funny, the strings that bind us to one another.
    | Posted on 2009-05-25 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]


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