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    dots Submission Name: soldier of the enddots

    Author: sickly
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 545/537/203
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
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       this is a freshly prepared character piece of my new genetik identity writings that i have developed over the last three years.

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    dotssoldier of the enddots

    dominating in the demi-monde damned
    a final world occurrence made so
    somewhere between heaven and hell
    say "sweet satan" , won't someone?
    secret sentry spy guard soldierer
    it's over!finished! and undertaking
    a life worth living is to seen
    to be seen is worth the living
    amongst the living, old gentleman
    next to nothing, and moreover...
    touched to be untouched in botch
    cop plot cover-up, fumble bungle
    soldierer of the endlessnesses, soldierer
    taken in the mist, a mistook town
    to the babble on some of babylon
    talk smart, straight, and clean
    took by the devil may care
    a sixth of one hundred is 17.8
    am i right, or am i right on?
    endlessness of come kingdom neo one

    Submitted on 2009-04-19 12:14:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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