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soldier of the end

Author: sickly
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Class/Type: Poetry /Gothic
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this is a freshly prepared character piece of my new genetik identity writings that i have developed over the last three years.

soldier of the end

dominating in the demi-monde damned
a final world occurrence made so
somewhere between heaven and hell
say "sweet satan" , won't someone?
secret sentry spy guard soldierer
it's over!finished! and undertaking
a life worth living is to seen
to be seen is worth the living
amongst the living, old gentleman
next to nothing, and moreover...
touched to be untouched in botch
cop plot cover-up, fumble bungle
soldierer of the endlessnesses, soldierer
taken in the mist, a mistook town
to the babble on some of babylon
talk smart, straight, and clean
took by the devil may care
a sixth of one hundred is 17.8
am i right, or am i right on?
endlessness of come kingdom neo one

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