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    Author: essence of life
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    Words: 301
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Being a Teen
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    Why? . . . I'll ask again for those who didn't hear me.

    Why?

    Now I'll clarify my disoriented behavior, simply put i was born in a world where trust is as brittle as copper.

    A natural chemical reaction is what I'll call it; because simple put it takes to energies to break a trust.

    First a promise, then a mistake!!!!

    I can't explain the kind of people in these "chemical reactions."

    The world is a paradox in it's self, then it happens to whole contradictable bastards on it.

    I'm rambling. . .

    Your still listening. . .

    I'm compelled to go on. . .

    You want my madness to end. . .

    I called us all "contradictable bastards." Are you offended?

    Why?

    Why not?

    How many times do you hear "God made the world equal?"

    How many times did you agree to that bullshit?

    Why?

    Why not?

    Can i call "God" placid? Can i even call "God?"

    Why? you ask,

    Why not? i wonder.

    God made me equal too you?

    Then explain why i can't even find myself being similar too you.

    Nevermind.

    I bet you would try that, wouldn't you?

    Why are we equal?

    Yet nether of us can understand?

    Could it be my arrogance?

    Or rather your ignorance?

    I'm compelled to learn.

    I desire understanding.

    Can you understand without learning?

    Can you truly learn without a perfect understanding?

    "Which came first the chicken or the egg?"




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      Ess, This is remarkably better that your earlier work. Questioning is good for the human condition, however your really ought to broaden your questions outside of your expiriance.

    ~Carrie =]
    | Posted on 2009-04-24 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]
      Hm...All very good questions, Essy. *ponders for a second* Shall I answer? xD


    Trust is always brittle. I doubt it would matter what world you entered. But, yet, I understand what you're saying. I say: Love all, but never give anyone your trust. Trust...is something entirely different. And, when you trust someone it's like giving them the power to either remake you or completely annihilate everything you are.



    Hm. I enjoy listening to your thoughts. It's not really rambling. It's how your brain functions. It's fascinating, really. Of course, I am your fangirl, so your everything is pretty fascinating to me. xD I can't say I'm entirely offending that you called us all contradictable [censored]s. *shrugs* It's how you feel now, and I'm sure that I'm rather hypocritical at times. I can't complain about your choice of words.




    Hm, 'God makes us equal'. Sure we're equal in some ways. We're equal in our worth in His eyes. We're equal in that we are both humans, that we were both given the chance to live. We're inequal in our talents and our life decisions. We're unequal in our personalities. But, he loves us all the same, despite our differences. Thus, we are equal in God's eyes.



    Of course, we're both ignorant, in my opinion. But, what would be the point of learning if we already knew all there was to know. Life is an adventure and a teacher, it will both instruct and entertain. You just have to embrace it.



    Who cares which came first? The chicken is the mother and the egg is the baby, but really it's a never ending cycle. Even the mother is taught by its children at times.



    Things happen, live keeps going. Hold on tight, Essy.


    <3 Sweets
    | Posted on 2009-04-22 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]
      This is explicit. Your questioning is closed minded but you have to be open minded to read it then understand it. Finding a similarity in one who lives different and is called equal is condescending or contradicting. But yet we all have a life and all have free will to live in a manner that we choose. Am I not equal? I would if I could but I fail, that in turn would set up apart yet then again we all fail in our own littler areas making us human. Confusing but forgiving. This is a good topic I would stick this into the debate and watch people argue over the matter. Lol! I dont know if you really meant it but if you do want to know what came first the chicken or the egg I would say the chicken so as to fertilize the egg other wise the egg wont get anywhere but being rotten.


    Faid
    | Posted on 2009-04-21 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]


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