Refreshness

Author: JoJoCrab Elite Ratio:    1.06 - 338 /113 /129 Words: 59

Class/Type: Poetry /Longing Total Views: 1176 Average Vote:    No vote yet. Bytes: 443

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Refreshness

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Reviving energy ignites courage To a new era awaken Self- reliance to a dead world being Regain strength after losing companions Long desert roads Tests a soul passage Praise am I With thanks are peaceful spirits Pursing slumber while creatures fear A dagger mentality relaxes Rinsing the stench to ascend self-assrance Underneath the waterfalls, I cleanse

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