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Serving a presence nearer to thee

Author: JoJoCrab
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Serving a presence nearer to thee

Knowing his presence is nearer
The Lord is my reflection
Dawning a newness
These precious moments
His touches are endlessly
A mindset so refreshing with thoughts
Darkness rises the night with another calm
Thanks to the Lord , I give
A heartbeat rhythm for the spirits
Glory is your beginning with the Master
Shine with others who serve as stewards
Stand in the light to except his alliance
Breakdown the walls of burdens
Charge unto his works as you progress
Be sure of your differences
Take count on daily expectations
Confide his words in your heart

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