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Author: JoJoCrab
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"Success can be brutal when crushing those who showed you the way honestly."

"A rooster may wake up a farm, but a domestic man initiate words of poultry."

"The mind has many freeways of information, but a detour can disrupt miles of facts."

"Obstruct the rivers of misery to undercurrent individuals cleansing in the waterfalls of no hope."

"Yearning adventure can be a chart of exploration, but remember who you are"

Submitted on 2009-04-21 05:44:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hey, these are really good!
Do you mind if I quote you in my english speach? The first one is my favourite :)

Love, Iffy
| Posted on 2009-04-24 00:00:00 | by Iffy | [ Reply to This ]

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