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you're not original. i'm not either.


Author: brokenmirror
ASL Info:    150/f/duiuwy89
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you're not original. i'm not either.



isn't poetry
somewhat cliché?
comprised of feelings
sometimes empty
but always shared
in some sort of way

how embarrassed we
should all be
when we convince ourselves
that we're original

this is just recycled
thought
i'm a contradiction

now go away




Submitted on 2009-04-21 07:16:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  whaahaha...so true. but it's da process not the outcome that is the drive of art.
| Posted on 2009-04-21 00:00:00 | by Shea Comet | [ Reply to This ]


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