you're not original. i'm not either.

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you're not original. i'm not either.

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isn't poetry somewhat cliché? comprised of feelings sometimes empty but always shared in some sort of way how embarrassed we should all be when we convince ourselves that we're original this is just recycled thought i'm a contradiction now go away

Submitted on 2009-04-21 07:16:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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whaahaha...so true. but it's da process not the outcome that is the drive of art.

| Posted on 2009-04-21 00:00:00 | by Shea Comet | [ Reply to This ]

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