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What is my choice?


Author: JoJoCrab
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What is my choice?



What is my choice? I do not know.
What is my choice? I cannot say.
What is my choice? Awaits me.
What is my choice? That bears with me.
What is my choice? Without despair.
Choices I choose is the choices I make.
Therefore, I am back without a choice.




Submitted on 2009-04-22 09:25:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I dont know how to comment this. It is more of a rant than a poem. But nice idea, about the difficulty of choices, making and having them. Then dealing with the consequences.

look forward to more,
-Randee
| Posted on 2009-04-22 00:00:00 | by UnderlinedInRed | [ Reply to This ]


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