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    dots Submission Name: fallingdots
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    Author: ty
    ASL Info:    21 male
    Elite Ratio:    1.74 - 322/295/292
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 91
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    Bytes: 380



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    your bringing me all you have to offer and its weight sinks my heart
    drowning from the waters i look up and see my air bubbles
    fighting for my life trying to swimback up your love just holds me down
    farther futher down i go the water seem to go from light to dark warm to cold
    like ah rock i sink to the depths falling to the place where my heart weeps




    Submitted on 2009-04-22 10:04:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a really complex piece. Its so full of emotion and yet so objectively writen. Like your watching it all happen. This is really amazing. It grasped my attention and held it. Very good job. Bravo!
    | Posted on 2009-06-11 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]
      feelings of rejection , but reaching out to that someone dearly, emotional thoughts with some hurt by being brokenhearted , great poem , showing meaning for what you are saying
    | Posted on 2009-04-22 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]



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