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    dots Submission Name: I’m a murderer dots
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    Author: insanegemini
    ASL Info:    17/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 12/17/34
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 65
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1148



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    dotsI’m a murderer dots
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    AHHHHH
    He’s dead
    Indeed I should have fled
    All over my floor he bled
    He went squish
    Under my feet
    Oh how I wish
    He would squirm like a fish
    I am a murderer
    Everything feels like a blur
    Did he have fur?
    Was he a spur?
    Did he make a sound like purr?
    All of this I must confer
    What if they come looking for me?
    How do I cover
    Will they discover
    What I have done
    Do I run?
    The coppers will surely lock me up
    I’ll be trapped like a pound pup
    Yup yup
    Its all over
    I need a four leaf clover a
    And change my name to rover
    MOREOVER
    I need to dispose
    Of everything
    Even the toes
    And I must compose
    Myself
    ARG
    Sigh
    Hmmm….
    Suppose
    No one knows
    Whose going to suspect
    Or even connect
    I was the one who wrecked
    The life of some innocent
    If they do approach
    I’ll simply say
    It was just a roach









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