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    dots Submission Name: SMILE!dots

    Author: Sonson888
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 6/25/48
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    This world is too small
    And this Life is too short
    And gloom is so heavy,
    But a smile transports!


    I know it seems tough
    And perhaps God's not there
    To guide us at all times
    But Hope must be kept.

    And smile again!

    Because without yours
    Mine would lack the strength
    To go on in this World
    Or to fall in the end!

    Don't let it fade, now!

    This world has it's winters
    Where nothing will show.
    But I promise that after
    Spring will make all regrow!

    So keep smiling, i beg you.
    Though Hearts may break yours.
    Because those lips are my compass
    To your Love's breezy shores!

    Submitted on 2009-04-22 14:05:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Your poem conveys a great message of smiling in adversities. Smile on the face and positive demeanour alleviates poignancy in life. While smiling and holding the hand of Lord the deep ocean of human life can be crossed swiftly and smoothly. Your poem is very well written.
    | Posted on 2009-04-23 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      very uplifting , strong thoughts with views, good details , great choice of words , great poem , take life with a ease and settle for the simple
    | Posted on 2009-04-22 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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