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    dots Submission Name: Two Frogsdots
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    Author: Adairme
    ASL Info:    18/f/United States of Hel
    Elite Ratio:    0.89 - 0/2/8
    Words: 284
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
    Total Views: 732
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1632



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    dotsTwo Frogsdots
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    A group of frogs were traveling through the woods, and two of them
    fell into a deep pit. When the other frogs saw how deep the pit
    was, they told the two frogs that they were as good as dead. The
    two frogs ignored the comments and tried to jump up out of the pit
    with all their might. The other frogs kept telling them to stop,
    that they were as good as dead. Finally, one of the frogs took
    heed to what the other frogs were saying and gave up. He fell down
    and died.

    The other frog continued to jump as hard as he could. Once again,
    the crowd of frogs yelled at him to stop the pain and just die. He
    jumped even harder and finally made it out. When he got out, the
    other frogs said, "Did you not hear us?" The frog explained to
    them that he was deaf. He thought they were encouraging him the
    entire time.

    This story teaches two lessons:

    1. There is power of life and death in the tongue. An encouraging
    word to someone who is down can lift them up and help them make it
    through the day.

    2. A destructive word to someone who is down can be what it takes
    to kill them.

    Be careful of what you say. Speak life to those who cross your
    path. The power of words... it is sometimes hard to understand
    that an encouraging word can go such a long way. Anyone can speak
    words that tend to rob another of the spirit to continue in
    difficult times. Special is the individual who will take the time
    to encourage another.




    Submitted on 2009-04-22 17:38:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Whoa.

    That had a very, decent moral. It was short and got to the point. Simplicity at it's best. I'm not saying that to offend you, if you ever thought of it that way. Lol. Forgive me if that's how it seemed. A good read it was too, Adai(Can I call you that?) How'd you come up with such a lovely idea?

    I'll keep this in mind, I've always adored fables(if that's what you meant for it to be). Isn't it hard to believe how much your words can weaken or strengthen a person?

    Hmm, feedback... I don't know how I should go about doing this. I have nothing to offer you nor nothing to correct your story of. Forgive me? I guess praising is alright with you too. I hope.

    Kudos to you! :)
    | Posted on 2009-04-22 00:00:00 | by LIMA | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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