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    dots Submission Name: A Curious Happeningdots
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    Author: Sonson888
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 6/25/48
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    dotsA Curious Happeningdots
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    It was a curious Happening
    Awaiting my escape.
    Behind that dusty window,
    Just somewhat past that drape.

    I saw beyond my garden greens
    And witnessed worlds away.
    I ventured with brave heroes
    Who came from other days.

    I slew demonic creatures.
    I climbed the Everest.
    I heard the calls of my grandsires
    And people- now at rest.

    So much to fill myself with joy
    'Till my eyes dangled tired.
    I've closed the windows for today
    To come some other hour.


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