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    dots Submission Name: for youdots

    Author: Hopless Romeo
    ASL Info:    100/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.11 - 0/2/11
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsfor youdots

    this distance between us kills me
    as a new day comes and goes i lay here
    thinkn of you.....
    the way you smile threw the phone when we talk i can almost see .
    the way i dream of your body moving with mine as i kiss your gentel lips.
    ever so lightly placing my hands so carfuly as tho im holding an angle.
    as we lay together and plan our future giggeling to the thought .
    praing at night you never leave
    to spend forever within those eyes gazing on me with such love as we embrace our love.
    touching me with soft hands lips so sweet enough to dirve me mad.
    your the angle i dream of every night and pray that this life will never let me live another day with out you .
    why dose this distance keep us apart
    all i need is you my life
    my love ......... my everything

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