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Author: KirbyCrane
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Words: 72
Class/Type: Poetry /Cutting or Mutilation
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Crazy and insane
there is no order
no guide lines
to my life
Nothing to keep me sane
Because I have control
over nothing
But one
myself
And the scars
are my bridal
and the fresh cuts
whip my life
back into order
an order
that is not
normaly there
Its what I crave
what I need
And this,
my razorblade
canh give me
If only for
a moment




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