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Sanctuary


Author: blackdemigod13
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Sanctuary


to go away, disappear,
to leave this world without a care.
to hide yourself away, never to be found,
why all the other peopleare busy above ground.
to never have to know how to lie,
to be innocent until you die.




Submitted on 2009-04-25 13:33:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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