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When I Die


Author: blackdemigod13
Elite Ratio:    1.52 - 56 /60 /41
Words: 56
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Average Vote:    3.0000
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When I Die



when i die don't mourn,
be glad, now someone else can be born.
it didn't hurt i didn't cry,
i slipped away in the blink of an eye.
i didn't want to leave you,
my time on earth was just through.
i didn't say ggod-bye,
just that one day again i'd be by your side.




Submitted on 2009-04-25 13:36:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Is this supposed to be related to a person? None the less its okay, i'm not really sure how to rate a poem
| Posted on 2009-04-25 00:00:00 | by shadowinuyasha | [ Reply to This ]


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