to pull away and see only what you want to see,
an image of who you wish you could be.
to hear nothing around you,
even though a million things surround you.
only you and what you feel,
it doesn't matter what is real.
And, regarding the poem, cool. I liked the read through it, with the flow and how it does really describe what meditation is about. The one let-down on this was that it wasn't extended, or I would've loved it to the max. I'll still probably favorite it because of the flow, though you should work on length a little.