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    dots Submission Name: Freedots
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    Author: JonInk
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 6/11/8
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 387
    Average Vote:    1.0000
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    dotsFreedots
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    When I go into a free place
    Where my mind breaks free
    Creativity takes a hold of me
    Being everything I'll ever be
    Reaching out for what I know,
    Learning patience allows me to grow.

    When I find that special place,
    Wherever it is.
    I'll grasp it, and take it for what it's worth.
    I will not waist this gift of life.
    I'm destined to reach the next step.
    Moving forward, and never looking back.
    I'm setting a place in my heart,
    Where strength is built to create.




    Submitted on 2009-04-25 21:47:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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