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    dots Submission Name: Script- Freak and the Ladydots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 41/64/75
    Words: 2601
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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       Script i had to do for class, its about a humuncolus. He's the guardian of palace eden, and lives 1000's years doing that duty; what story sticks out most in his life?

    copyrighted by Crysta Perak


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    dotsScript- Freak and the Ladydots
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    FREAK AND THE LADY

    Scene 1


    FADE IN

    INTERIOR PALACE OF EDEN

    NARRATOR

    'I am Master Hanabulada, and I have been creating Guardians for the Palace of Eden since the time before humanity trusted in our Holy Lord and knew of his existence.'

    Soft whispers of incantations echo across the moonlit halls of the Palace of Eden, as dirt is plummeting to the ground, one small piece at a time.

    NARRATOR
    The Magik used for my creations is the same as when our Holy Lord first created humanity and laid them upon this earth.

    The pulpous soil is being forged into the shape of a human - incantations, whispers and grunts spring through the soil-enchanted being as Seeds of Life are placed upon it, creating flowing roots that seem like blood vessels of a man flowing through the dirt.

    NARRATOR
    The Lords Magik is forbidden to be used by any shaman or spell casters in this era. This is due to the fact, if used incorrectly, and the correct constraints are not applied to the being, I, as the Master of it, will lose control of my Guardian the homunculus.

    The pile of root-filled-human-shaped dirt is formed. Soil is being replaced by muscle, and thus pulpous soft skin envelopes the body. Eyes emerge from sockets, hair sprouts from head, arms, eyebrows, pits and the genital areas. The new existence takes a breath and looks at his surroundings, and then to his creator.

    MASTER HANABULADA
    Welcome Ulkai, I am your Master For the next millennium, until your existence has come to an end, you, Ulkai shall heed all my words.

    Confused the homunculus looks at the tired and ragged old man, and nods.

    ULKAI
    Yes, Master, for the next millennium until my existence has come to an end, I, Ulkai shall heed all of my Masters words.

    FADE OUT TO BLACK

    160 YEARS LATER

    SCENE 2

    FADE IN

    INTERIOR - PALACE OF EDEN - THE GARDENS

    NARRATOR

    Ulkai may appear to be human, this soil created being - but inhuman qualities like Magik he possess.

    The earth shakes slowly, and a huge bulk of rock is lifted from the ground as Ulkai appears to be doing something that looks like yoga.

    ULKAI
    Why...must I have these unforgiving powers...?

    The rock is levitated into the air, when Ulkai lifts his arms up. Then Ulkai's fists close and the rock is crushed into several pieces.

    NARRATOR
    These powers are used to protect the Palace of Eden.

    Ulkai sighs and releases his fist, and looks up to the full moon shinning down.

    ULKAI
    Why...must I not be truly human...?

    Echos of patter in the distant halls of the Palace Eden can be heard.

    ULKAI
    (weary)
    huh?

    INTERIOR - PALACE OF EDEN - GRAND HALL

    Ulkai walks toward the halls of the Palace of Eden, listening closely for the patter. Then Ulkai sees a shadow skitter across his outer vision.

    ULKAI
    Who's there?

    The patter commences again as the shadow moves behind a pillar. Ulkai lights the halls with a conjured flame from his black gloved finger tips.

    SHADOW (UNKNOWN)
    (GASP!)

    Ulkai, undeterred by the gasp, still walks toward the last note of patter, then suddenly the shadow slowly walks from the pillar, just as the light revealed the face of a beautiful lady. With the women being so mesmerizing, the flame on Ulkai's gloved fingers lit more brightly, and to some extent frighting the exquisite dame.

    SCENE 3

    INTERIOR - PALACE OF EDEN - GRAND HALL

    NARRATOR

    Usually genuine humans who see Ulkai regard him as witchery, an abomination. No one see's Ulkai for what he truly is.

    Ulkai is walking down the halls of the Palace Eden, with his conjured flame. Then there's the patter again, and a shadow walks out from a pillar and greets Ulkai with a kiss.

    NARRATOR
    But now, Ulkai's view of himself has altered into something pure. The Lady of the Night changed him.

    Ulkai smiles and takes The Lady of the Nights hand, and leads her through the palace.

    NARRATOR
    She treated Ulkai the way any human should be treated; with love, and respect.

    Ulkai and the Lady of the Night enter the palace gardens. A vast terrain of roses, trees, and small animals, with a huge pond in the middle which contained white swans. They stop in a soft patch of grass, and they look over to the swans, together, forming a heart with their necks, under the moonlight.

    NARRATOR
    This is how Ulkai's heart was entangled by the silk web of her affection.

    Ulkai gently takes his hand and places it on the Lady of the Nights cheek and they start kissing each other gently, and then it starts getting more intense, and they fall upon the supple bedding.

    FADE OUT

    Scene 4

    INTERIOR - PALACE OF EDEN - LIBRARY

    NARRATOR

    During each encounter, Ulkai and the Lady would speak of their long day of being apart. She would tell him the stories of humanity outside of the Palace of Eden.

    Ulkai and the Lady sit at a desk, looking through many books, and histories of the world

    ULKAI
    What is your favorite flower?

    Lady of the night
    (smiles) The rose, but I think I might like the white ones more then the red ones - the color red reminds me of blood.

    ULKAI
    Really? But what does white mean to you?

    LADY OF THE NIGHT
    It means the purity of the heart, and my love to you.
    Ulkai looks at her for a moment, then he utters a few incantations and produces a single white rose.

    ULKAI
    Then forever shall this rose remind me of you.

    Ulkai takes the rose and places it in her hair. The lady smiles.

    FADE OUT

    SCENE 5

    interior - master hanabulada's chamber

    FADE IN

    Master Hanabulada is at his chambers desk. It's lit by the Moonlight coming from the window to the right. He writes in his journal, then he looks up to see Ulkai walking in the door.

    MASTER HANABULADA
    You should learn to knock.

    ULKAI
    Sorry Master.

    Ulkai walks out of the room, closes the door behind him, and then we hear a knock.

    MASTER HANABULADA
    Welcome Ulkai, thank you for coming.

    Ulkai bows to his master.

    ULKAI
    What service may I present you with?

    Master Hanabulada starts flicking through his journal. Mumbling to himself as he reads through the pages.

    MASTER HANABULADA
    Yes, there's one thing... Your mistress...

    The Master takes a deep breath.

    MASTER HANABULADA
    You may not want to hear this from me Ulkai, but, the Lady's love might not last as long as you think it may.

    Ulkai's fist clench and as he tries not to disobey his Masters words. Furry is in his eyes.

    MASTER HANABULADA
    Humans, are creatures who's hearts, and ideas change endlessly.

    ULKAI
    Master, with as much respect coming from myself - I love the Lady of the Night, and she would NEVER betray our bond.

    Ulkai bow's and turns around bruskly, walks out and slams the door. Master Hanabulada is left alone in his chamber sitting on his desk. He flicks through his pages.

    MASTER HANABULADA
    No matter how strong your love is to your Mistress Ulkai, it will not last her ever changing thoughts.

    Master Hanabulada flicks one more page, sighs and closes his journal revealing the tittle 'Master's Note Book III - Freak & The Lady'

    FADE OUT

    SCENE 6

    EXTERIOR - TOWN MARKET

    FADE IN

    The Lady of the Night walks through the town square carrying a basket. All eyes are on her.

    NARRATOR
    To Ulkai's avail, naught could last forever, not even this seemingly immortal love.

    The lady stops at a food stand, which carried various vegetables and fruits. The merchant looks at her, with a grim face.

    MERCHANT 1
    Please don't curse my food with you hands that have carresed that ruthless abomination!

    The merchant slams his wares shut, and trolly's down the road to find another spot. The Ladie's eyes sadden. She walks to another stand to purchase some fruits, once again the merchant looks at her with eyes of furry and sorrow, not even saying anything, he shuts his wares. The Lady Looks around to the faces of the peasants and other people surrounding her, whispers of conversations are heard.

    Peasant 1
    Why does she dirty your soul on this taboo...

    PEASANT 1
    (disgustedly) He's not even human!...

    Merchant 3
    He is a curse! Our Holy Lord does not accept such beings as this!

    MERCHANT 4
    Did you know those beings can't reproduce...

    The Lady of the Nights face is full of frustration as she walks the side walks of the square, and comes upon a little girl who looks up at her, not smiling.

    GIRL
    Do not fall for his Satanic traps, my lady!

    Running down the road - she leaves the girl behind amongst the dust. Dropping the basket on her way, while tears are running down her cheeks.

    LADY OF THE NIGHT
    I cannot do this anymore...i'm sorry Ulkai!

    FADE OUT

    SCENE 7

    INTERIOR - PALACE OF EDEN - THE GARDENS


    Ulkai sits on a tree that is hoisted above the water. He looks at his reflection intently.

    ULKAI
    Is it a curse that I am not human?

    Ulkai dips his finger tips in the water, spoiling his reflection. The image is morphed into something hideous. Ulkai frowns. There's patter coming from the Grand Hall, Ulkai smiles and jumps up from his spot, and waits for the Lady. The Lady of the Night enters the Gardens, her frown is notable from afar, Ulkai, worried walks up quickly toward her.

    ULKAI
    My love?

    The Lady stops before Ulkai, her head down. Ulkai tries to touch her face, she backs away from his touch. Ulkai looks at her confused.

    ULKAI
    What's wrong?

    LADY OF THE NIGHT
    Ulkai...

    The lady takes a unsteady breath.

    LADY OF THE NIGHT
    I cannot see you no longer!

    Suddenly she turns around and starts to run away. Ulkai grabs her arm, she stops.

    ULKAI
    Why?...

    LADY OF THE NIGHT
    You...your an abomination! I can't stay with you forever!

    Ulkai frozen at her words, watches as she takes the White rose he had given her awhile ago and throws it to the ground.

    LADY OF THE NIGHT
    Our love is no longer pure, it's tinted with shame! Shame on my part! I can no longer listen to the criticizing words of the peasants of the market, I can no longer shame my family, my race!

    The lady covers her face with her hands, Ulkai stands infront of her. An unknown rage is awakened within him.

    LADY OF THE NIGHT
    Forget me Ulkai... be as if this has not happened.

    The Lady of the Night once again turns around, but this time Ulkai doesn't stop her, he watches as she leaves the gardens - still standing there, Ulkai listens till her patter is no longer echoing in the Grand Hall.

    FADE OUT

    SCENE 8

    Exterior - TOWN MARKET

    NARRATOR

    Furious and pained at heart by the Lady of the Nights betrayal, Ulkai's fevering battle of thoughts rush through him, and unable to control his emotions he explodes into a shock of violence.

    Screams bustle through the square, peasants running, and dropping their belongings. Some merchants try to escape with their goods. Ulkai is destroying the town. Ulkai's Magik raises the ground and rocks and debris are thrown at the citizens. Body's are crushed. Blood is spilled upon the rubble. Ulkai is furious.

    ULKAI
    WHHYYY!!! YOU HUMANS! THE ABOMINATIONS! YOU DESTROYED MY LOVE'S HEART, MY LOVES MIND! FOR THAT YOU ALL SHALL BE DESTROYED!

    Ulkai lifts a child and throws her to the wall. She hits it and slides down, leaving blood trails behind. Rage. Endless rage.

    NARRATOR
    In Ulkai's furry of destruction, the Lord made the unthinkable happen.

    LADY OF THE NIGHT
    ULKAI!

    Ulkai stops, and turns around, his eyes are red. The lady of the night screams him to stop.

    LADY OF THE NIGHT
    STOP THIS ULKAI! YOU ARE DESTROYING THE TOWN!

    Ulkai, unable to control his rage, picks her for the next target. He runs up to her and slams his hand through her gut. Blood gushes out. The Lady of the Night falls to the ground. The white rose Ulkai had given to her is being dripped with blood. The rose is red. Tainted.

    ULKAI
    No.....no...no...NOOO!

    Ulkai's furry vanishes. He kneels down to his former mistress. Sobbing. He takes her up in his lap.

    ULKAI
    What have I done....? WHAT HAVE I DONE!!!!!.... My love...

    The sourrounding town is completelty destroyed, many bodies of ended lives lay upon the earth. Red poppies start to grow upon the earth.

    FADE OUT

    SCENE 9

    INTERIOR - THE PALACE OF EDEN - THE GARDENS


    Ulkai sits upon the tree that is hoisted over the water. Looking at his reflection, while dipping his finger tips in the water. It's distorted. Master Hanabulada walks in from the halls, and stands on the ground behind Ulkai.

    MASTER HANABULADA
    Ulkai

    Ulkai still watches his reflection.

    ULKAI
    (depressing voice)Yes Master?

    The Master sighs.

    MASTER HANABULADA
    Time for you to do your duty.

    Ulkai looks at his reflection for awhile more, then he slowly gets up to do his patrol of The Palace of Eden.

    ULKAI
    Yes Master

    NARRATOR
    Unable to end his life, due to his attachment to guarding The Palace of Eden, Ulkai sits looking across the empty moonlit halls, where he met his Lady of the night. Until his life has come to an end, in a millennium, he shall always remember her fragrance, her smile and the love she showed him, but also her betrayal, and his own sin.

    FADE OUT

    END

    copyrighted by Crysta Perak




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