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    dots Submission Name: Love Exchangedots
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    Author: ChaoticLaurel
    Elite Ratio:    4.69 - 14/15/23
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 133
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 676



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    dotsLove Exchangedots
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    She was desperate for love
    Cos she couldn’t love herself

    She said:
    "Hey, attractive Stranger,
    Love me, I’ll love you back!"

    Once,
    Stranger’s love was hers;
    She abandoned her mind,
    She esteemed his body
    Forgetting he was Wrong.

    Yet,
    Her soul cried for truth-
    Their story had been too long.

    She's wondering again
    Eyes largely closed
    Searching, with a blind spirit,
    Another drastic lie.

    She now believe in fairies,
    But in love exchanges
    She refuses to put faith.






    Submitted on 2009-04-26 16:28:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i liked it, it sounds like you have a hard time letting go. someone told me that when you are ready to truely be loved you will let go of what you believe love is and just let it happen. i enjoyed reading your poem tho...let go and see what happens! i think what you find will make you happy :)
    | Posted on 2009-05-04 00:00:00 | by joezwells | [ Reply to This ]
      its good, i kinda under stand what is happing..
    sounds like something i once siad for let a stranger love me. but it is good i enjoyed reading it...
    loves Dommy
    | Posted on 2009-04-28 00:00:00 | by Rubesangel | [ Reply to This ]



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