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Author: joezwells
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Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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challenges she faces
they knock her off her feet
somehow always rising above
she wont face defeat
she is as strong as they come
and i dont know how
everthing she tells me
makes my feet stay on the ground
i dont know what i did
to deserve her in my life
she is always there for me
helping me to win my fight
she tells me what i need to here
whether im right or im wrong
shes always pushing me foward
even when shes gone
i wouln't know who i am
if i didnt have her in my life
she is a beautiful person
and i'll love her all my life
if i didnt have her
i would simply be a mess
everyday i am thankful
even when i'm depressed
i havent seen her for months
and i cant wait until the day
she lands in california
on that airport runway
everday she shines
shes my best friend for life
we are partners in crime
until the day we die
danna you are awesome
and i love you long time!!!!

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