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    dots Submission Name: DANNA BANANAdots
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    Author: joezwells
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 64/78/54
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsDANNA BANANAdots
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    challenges she faces
    they knock her off her feet
    somehow always rising above
    she wont face defeat
    she is as strong as they come
    and i dont know how
    everthing she tells me
    makes my feet stay on the ground
    i dont know what i did
    to deserve her in my life
    she is always there for me
    helping me to win my fight
    she tells me what i need to here
    whether im right or im wrong
    shes always pushing me foward
    even when shes gone
    i wouln't know who i am
    if i didnt have her in my life
    she is a beautiful person
    and i'll love her all my life
    if i didnt have her
    i would simply be a mess
    everyday i am thankful
    even when i'm depressed
    i havent seen her for months
    and i cant wait until the day
    she lands in california
    on that airport runway
    everday she shines
    shes my best friend for life
    we are partners in crime
    until the day we die
    danna you are awesome
    and i love you long time!!!!




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