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    dots Submission Name: Im donedots
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    Author: joezwells
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 64/78/54
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsIm donedots
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    i finally quit
    i set down the bottle
    put down the pipe
    and i look forward to tomorrow
    i act like im strong
    that i can do this all day long
    deep down inside i know that i am wrong
    i never thought i would be this way
    im weaker than ever
    but im afraid to tell
    im scared to death
    and on this thought i dwell
    im sick as fuck
    and no matter how hard i try
    i cant stop these tears that i cry
    sobreity brings so many gifts
    but in the time it takes to get them
    all i can hear is the clock tick
    my disease will never go away
    and for my past i will always pay
    those blackouts that i had always had
    only god knows what i did
    and for that i am so sad
    i almost died a million times
    i dont even know if i commited any crimes
    do you know what its like to not remember?
    not just one night
    but the whole month of december?
    im 21 and have nothing to show
    did i intend my life to be like this?
    to that i can honestly say NO!!!!!!














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      Wow I too have nothing to show and will be 21 this Aug... I know as well how it is to know you should have been dead 10 times over.. from drug over doses and also from my own stupidity.... Also its NEVER too late to make a change for the better. "Better now than never"
    great write! amazing A
    Jackz
    | Posted on 2009-06-08 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      BRAVO!. I ablsolutely loved this. I too am trying to put everything down. I want my life to better than what it is with alcohol and drugs. This is such an anspiration for me to keep trying to get sober and straight. Keep it up! I am looking forward to reading more of your work!
    Dominique
    | Posted on 2009-06-06 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]


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